[Haskell-cafe] STM program

Hi, Café, I'm playing with STM a bit, and did a small writeup. As I'm considering to submit it, uh, tomorrow, I was wondering if anybody would care to take a look? I'm especially nervous about the accuracy and clarity of my descriptions of monads and STM, which are terse and written in a hurry. Anyway: I'd be most grateful for any feedback you care to give. http://malde.org/~ketil/stmcluster.pdf -k -- If I haven't seen further, it is by standing in the footprints of giants